Angel Fallen

I don't know if that's even a good name! Mr Woody, can we have some time to work on this story in class? So Bx, what are we going to do? I was thinking of changing Diantha's name to Talitha, and maybe starting the story from the point where the storm is, then skipping ahead to the plane. Tell me what you think.

P.S. This is intended for Catgirl and maybe Mr Woody